Construction III (free verse)
Construction III (free verse)Leny Roovers12-12-2005The iron skeleton is hidden now.As layers of wood and concreteadd flesh and strength,the structure slowly grows- develops character.Like an unborn...
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Great imagery, here Leny... And I love the surprise... It's a Girl! Enjoyed the whole series!Kevin
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Hi Kevin,Yep... it's a school they are building, and for some reason I tend to add gender to things... this definitely is a girl!my car is a boy, so is my computer...but my laptop was a girl again....
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I love this and also was interested in the comments. I tend to genderise my things. Cars and my lappys are always female for obvious reasons. Funny thing, I never personalised my PC, perhaps thats why...
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Hi Lorraine,Glad you like it, I love watching the progress made each day, esp. late afternoon, when the workers are going home, after securing things for the night. It all looks so tidy and quiet...
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My car definitely is male! Never thought it could be so inspiring, to watch a building being erected. It really is a kind of birth, I feel. Right now theworkers are cleaning up after the day's work,...
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Enjoying the birth of a school through your eyes...the images and detail in your poetry bring it to life. Gloria
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Thanks, GLoria, for reading and comments. Hope there will be more.Leny
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Personification is a key in free-verseotherwise it just sounds like broken sentences.See! You did good! You used, quite effectively,the device to fully illustrate birth of _______ (fill in blank).
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Hi Jeff,It's going to be a school. I'm happy with your comments!Leny
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